Atomic Angel Intro
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Grey is the lead of Holy Host Care and Manufacturing, making sure that only the best have angels within their machines. No one will answer her questions and her team has realized that the Host - that God - is eating away at their planet. If they do not act soon their planet will crumble just as the Second Martyr - Earth - did years ago.
Here are the first three chapters of my story, Atomic Angel. This sample is is 7.7k words, while the full project is at 80k. Chapters are being published once a week on my patreon. The sample is for those who can't afford patreon, who want to see if they like my writing or want to see the exclusive art within Atomic Angel.
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Real cool concept! The characters are interesting, and I liked the mini-twist towards the end, but I shan't spoil it for others reading. The prose itself looks like it wants editing, but I know this is a work-in-progress, so I understand. I value worldbuilding and story more than prose anyways, and from what I've read here, those are on solid bases.
Thank you so much! yes the polish of my prose is always a bit rough, I am dyslexic so every time I fix something I break another haha. I am really happy you like the world!! This story started as my head getting clogged with world building ideas and having to let it live. Thank you so much for giving some time to my story!!
I hope today is treating you well!!
that's so real on fixing something, breaking something else, lol. and of course, i hope your day is swell!